Centaur Poetry / Stories

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: I think I'll try writing something tonight to get some life to this section, too. :o

2006-09-01 [Zab]: yay! :D

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: When tired, I can be pretty random. I just realised the divider shows off a part of an equine behind. <_<

2006-09-01 [Zab]: XD!

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: I feel slightly perverted now. :P

2006-09-01 [Zab]: but it's the..uhm..''korset''..not the bum!§

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: 'korset'? *blinks*

2006-09-01 [Zab]: The part of the horses back that's between the lower back/loin and the tail:P

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: Mmkay. :P

2006-09-01 [Zab]: ^__________^ it's swedish..I don't know the english word..XD

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: Umumum. I figured it was Swedish, but I don't have the appropriate dictionary anywhere near me. :P

2006-09-01 [Zab]: aww..no swedish dictionary? Whhhyyyyy? XD *hurt

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: Welll... I think we have one downstairs at least, but I'm too lazy to fetch it. :P I've no idea where I put the minidictionary I used in school. o.O

2006-09-01 [Zab]: 2 gods, you have one..XD!!!!!!!

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: Yeah, I kind of have to... Because Swedish is still a mandatory subject in our schools. >:O

2006-09-01 [Zab]: Mohahahahahahahahahahahaha!
We is teh ebil!

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: Yes, you are. :P

2006-09-01 [Zab]: *proud of it* ^_____^

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: *tickleattacks*

2006-09-01 [Zab]: *sneezes*

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: :o

2006-09-01 [Linderel]: Yay, I'm finished with the story! \o/
I'll have a friend proofread it, though, so I won't be posting it yet. :P

2006-09-01 [Zab]: hehe yaaay!

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: Hrm. Apparently it's not good. If it's not good, I can't post it. I need to write a new one.

2006-09-03 [Zab]: :O nuuu

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: I have an extremely black and white view on my writings. If it's not good, it's crap. And crap's worth just that.
Of course, you can read it and say if you think it can be posted, but I'm not likely to change my mind about how I feel about it.

2006-09-03 [Zab]: aws.... no. I won't read it i it won't be posted.

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: It's crap. *cries*

2006-09-03 [Zab]: aw..it's not.

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: *goes take a nap* And hopefully I'll be less angsty about it after getting some sleep...

2006-09-03 [Zab]: yeah.:S

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: I am told it's not crappy, it just lacks that Certain Something. From the proofreader-person's point of view. Maybe someone will think it's good, he tends to have high standards, anyway. :P
Whatever, for me there's no difference, I can't tell what's good and what's not about my own stuff. xD It's all crap to me. :P

2006-09-03 [Zab]: XD aws. Shouldn't be.

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: <_<
Well, I can tell myself I'm getting better, and definitely that I've gotten better from what I was two years or even a year ago. It's just that I'm still very insecure. ._.
Anyways... I think I'll put it up, I'll just edit in the corrections and try to come up with a decent title. And then I can start thinking about writing the next one, which hopefully will be better...

2006-09-03 [sequeena_rae]: Don't worry, mine isn't that much better *hopes to be finished soon*
But at least we will have done something x)

2006-09-03 [Zab]: Good thinking:P

2006-09-04 [Linderel]: There we go, first story. ^_^

2006-09-05 [Zab]: It sucks! XD (the poetry I submitted..not the story..x)
But it felt empty up there.

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: It doesn't suck! :o It has some typos, but they're forgivable. :P
And you can rhyme! *tips hat*

2006-09-05 [Zab]: *lmao* It does too! Change the typos if you want..as long as it doesn't affect the rhymes..x)

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: Does not. :P

2006-09-05 [Zab]: XD

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: Hum. Would it look silly if centered?

2006-09-05 [Zab]: do as you want..but I like it as it is..Oo

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: Just thinking. :P

2006-09-05 [Zab]: :P